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Ok, don't worry yourselves everyone. This is not a drill. Due to Deviant Art's word cap, I realized a bunch of edits going into my story have not been getting updated. So, I made a Google Doc which you can follow here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NwdIJMALxxi6egHz832IuNIHy1J7JAqulJFoGeLM5tY/edit?hl=en_US or an actual hyperlinky thingy below in the description. I was gonna just delete this and re-post something about it, but with so many of you commenting I was just overcome by your words. So, I wanted to keep them so that I can remember you all! Thanks!

Also, for additional fan work (art, writings, etc) check out my favorite gallery called "My Little Dashie Fan Work" here http://robcakeran53.deviantart.com/favourites/46446902
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IMPORTANT OVER THE REST! Here is the link to the google docs version. I'm not sure how commenting works in that program, but you can simply comment here if you'd like. [link]

Edit 12/04/2011 Well, some people have been having problems with gdocs, so I now have it up on FiMfiction.net, here ya'll go! [link]

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This story, though it's original intentions were not existant, has opened my own eyes to how I write a story. It's not always about the details, or how much content is in it. It's about finding that right tone for the story; nailing down the emotion as it fills your mind with it's words. And, most important about this story, I do not give you, the readers, a full ending.

Why?

It's simple; if I gave you guys an ending, say I whether Dashie remembers her memories or not, then that means the story is done. That's it, so you are done worrying about it. With leaving this open for you, it sticks in your mind longer. You think about it, what could have happened or what you want to happen. That, is this stories goal. It is to keep you wondering, thinking, about what could happen.

I know there will be many people who wish to continue this story. Give closure to it, and make it happy. That is fine. That just means that is how they want it to end, but does not mean it is officially how it ends. I leave that up to you, my readers, to question, ponder, and wonder what becomes of Dashie and her adoptive father.

Thank you, again, for reading this. It has meant a lot to hear such good about this simple writing.

On another note, I'd like to give a huge thanks once again to my editor, and he has even graced us with some words, so if you'd like here you go! Copy/pasta'd from the chat with him.

:iconsirpeppermintjam: Hi there! I'm Peppermint Jam, editor of "My Little Dashie." I just wanted to say a few things, since, well, editors rarely get thier voice heard(as far as I know).

Anyway, a while ago, ROB sent me a note over Deviantart, asking me to edit this fic of his. He told me it was based off of that one comic that is linked in the story. I had seen the comic, and that made me a little wary.

Then I read it. Oh Celestia, the emotions I felt while reading...I broke down in a Starbucks. I had to be a part of this. I told him I'd edit it, for great justice.

One week, many arguments, a few revisions, and three nights without sleep, and here we are. I'm  not surprised at how popular this is. I knew this would be something great.
I've noticed that the ending has a bit of a love/hate relationship. I want it to be clear that it was left open like that on purpose. We wanted the reader to come to their own conclusion. I still have about four different endings sitting on my desktop. They will probably never be posted.

I've learned a lot this past week or so. A lot about writing, and a lot about myself. It's been a pleasure being a part of this.

I just want to say thank you. To everyone. This fandom never ceases to amaze me. It's the first one I've been a part of, and the first one that's changed me for the better.

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Hope you enjoy this, it's based off of a comic I saw on Equestria Daily a day or so ago. [link] by this amazing man here: [link]

For additional fan work of this story, check out my favorite gallery here: [link]

If you make something and wish it to be shared in the folder, please don't hesitate to let me know. I'd love to have it in there!

:iconsirpeppermintjam:, :iconcthuluigi: and :icondelta-pangaea: thanks guys, and I hope to continue to get this fine tuned when needed.

Shit, how could I forget? My Little Pony, the pony characters used, and Equestria in general all belong to Hasbro. I hope you guys don't get mad over this and send it, or me, to the moon.
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:iconrobcakeran53:
I agree with most of what you say. But at this point, honestly I'm just trying to leave this story behind me and go onto different things. It's just so rooted into the fandom now that I don't think re-doing it would do anything.
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Let me start off by saying I am an ex-MlP fan. I no longer get excited when a new episode comes on, I laugh at obsessed whinny bronies, and I rarely even comment on MlP fan-anything these days but I saw this as "THE BEST MLP FIC EVER" somewhere so I decided to finally feed my curiosity and I am disappointed. Seriously expected a lot more from "the best mlp fic ever", but then I checked the date and saw it was written over two years ago I went "old work is old" so I forgive you for all the craptastic gammar issues and dull sentences that seem to litter this piece (is it safe to assume your more recent works are a bit cleaner than this one?).

In my defense, I read this thing at least 4 times just to make sure I wasn't some robot, but it wasn't that sad of a story. Didn't even shed a tear and it surprises me that so many people here are crying their eyes out and making this out to be the saddest thing in the freaking world. I'm sorry to say it just isn't. I just don't feel that emotion that seems to be spreading around because of this fiction, it just isn't there for me. I do admit though it was one of the more better, probably more thought out MLP fics floating around and I will congratulate you on that.

On the positive side of this probably really negative comment, I will watch you, not because of this story, but because I like watching writers grow and have their efforts be reflected through their work. I hope you write something original though, nothing says "I'm improving" like trying your hand at developing your own characters and ideas. ^w^

And to end this: to all the people who read this and think I'm heartless for not crying...grow up. The world is full of sad things that deserve attention and the fact a FANFICTON (a poorly edited one at that) made you burst into tears makes me want to high five you in the face with a chair. =x=
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Mood: Joy ~djumbreon Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I just finished reading your story here. ;-; you deserve a round of aupplase for this. that story was so beautiful I've just about been put into tears over it. *claps*
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:iconandrewtheowl:
By Tia, this was an amazing story. I was unbelievably overwhelmed by all the tears, just - absolutely - flowing down my face. I've never read a story that made me cry before, and well...needless to say I was crying like never before. When he mentioned a Dashie plush, I cried hard, then remembered I made one, and gave it a big hug. I felt just a bit better...I only wish she said: "I love you." :iconhttgplz:
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:iconmajoras-vengeance:
SON OF A BITCH IT'S BEAUTIFUL AND PAINFULLY BITTERSWEET. God I hate having empathy. Fuck you. :| Well I don't mean that, but imagining someone having joy for that long only to have it SPOILER'D is like if the feels was a male, this story is getting a sledgehammer to the nads. I am in tears ;^;
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Mood: Affection ~vincemanners12 Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I've read this a week ago... Reading it again made my eyes flow rivers. Believe me, I never cried on anything, just teary eyed. But man, I cannot hold these tears. Not even on my second reading. This probably made me realize a lot of things. Thank you for this wonderful little story
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:iconguille832:
This is the only story that has made me cry. I´ve never felt this even before
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:iconbrainiac120:
That was beautiful, man. I cried. I'm still crying. This is the best story ever.
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~InvaderZezix Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I cried when i read this. I have my own Rainbow Dash plushie. Now whenever I look at it, I wish it was real. This story is a masterpeice!
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~InvaderZezix Jan 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I cried when I read this. i have my own Rainbow Dash plushie. Now it seems like more than a little toy. I know that sounds weird but this story is really touching... good work. A true masterpiece.
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