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Ok, don't worry yourselves everyone. This is not a drill. Due to Deviant Art's word cap, I realized a bunch of edits going into my story have not been getting updated. So, I made a Google Doc which you can follow here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NwdIJMALxxi6egHz832IuNIHy1J7JAqulJFoGeLM5tY/edit?hl=en_US or an actual hyperlinky thingy below in the description. I was gonna just delete this and re-post something about it, but with so many of you commenting I was just overcome by your words. So, I wanted to keep them so that I can remember you all! Thanks!

Also, for additional fan work (art, writings, etc) check out my favorite gallery called "My Little Dashie Fan Work" here http://robcakeran53.deviantart.com/favourites/46446902

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IMPORTANT OVER THE REST! Here is the link to the google docs version. I'm not sure how commenting works in that program, but you can simply comment here if you'd like. [link]

Edit 12/04/2011 Well, some people have been having problems with gdocs, so I now have it up on FiMfiction.net, here ya'll go! [link]

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This story, though it's original intentions were not existant, has opened my own eyes to how I write a story. It's not always about the details, or how much content is in it. It's about finding that right tone for the story; nailing down the emotion as it fills your mind with it's words. And, most important about this story, I do not give you, the readers, a full ending.

Why?

It's simple; if I gave you guys an ending, say I whether Dashie remembers her memories or not, then that means the story is done. That's it, so you are done worrying about it. With leaving this open for you, it sticks in your mind longer. You think about it, what could have happened or what you want to happen. That, is this stories goal. It is to keep you wondering, thinking, about what could happen.

I know there will be many people who wish to continue this story. Give closure to it, and make it happy. That is fine. That just means that is how they want it to end, but does not mean it is officially how it ends. I leave that up to you, my readers, to question, ponder, and wonder what becomes of Dashie and her adoptive father.

Thank you, again, for reading this. It has meant a lot to hear such good about this simple writing.

On another note, I'd like to give a huge thanks once again to my editor, and he has even graced us with some words, so if you'd like here you go! Copy/pasta'd from the chat with him.

:iconsirpeppermintjam: Hi there! I'm Peppermint Jam, editor of "My Little Dashie." I just wanted to say a few things, since, well, editors rarely get thier voice heard(as far as I know).

Anyway, a while ago, ROB sent me a note over Deviantart, asking me to edit this fic of his. He told me it was based off of that one comic that is linked in the story. I had seen the comic, and that made me a little wary.

Then I read it. Oh Celestia, the emotions I felt while reading...I broke down in a Starbucks. I had to be a part of this. I told him I'd edit it, for great justice.

One week, many arguments, a few revisions, and three nights without sleep, and here we are. I'm  not surprised at how popular this is. I knew this would be something great.
I've noticed that the ending has a bit of a love/hate relationship. I want it to be clear that it was left open like that on purpose. We wanted the reader to come to their own conclusion. I still have about four different endings sitting on my desktop. They will probably never be posted.

I've learned a lot this past week or so. A lot about writing, and a lot about myself. It's been a pleasure being a part of this.

I just want to say thank you. To everyone. This fandom never ceases to amaze me. It's the first one I've been a part of, and the first one that's changed me for the better.

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Hope you enjoy this, it's based off of a comic I saw on Equestria Daily a day or so ago. [link] by this amazing man here: [link]

For additional fan work of this story, check out my favorite gallery here: [link]

If you make something and wish it to be shared in the folder, please don't hesitate to let me know. I'd love to have it in there!

:iconsirpeppermintjam:, :iconcthuluigi: and :icondelta-pangaea: thanks guys, and I hope to continue to get this fine tuned when needed.

Shit, how could I forget? My Little Pony, the pony characters used, and Equestria in general all belong to Hasbro. I hope you guys don't get mad over this and send it, or me, to the moon.

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:iconaugui:
Far out, still coming back to this weeks after first reading it and still just as painfully beautiful.
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:iconarbiter294:
Oh.My.God...That made me tear up so much...:'( But I loved this story...now I want a My Little Dashie.At least we get to see her adventures with the Covenet...and Arbiter on My Little Halo:Friendship is Tactical.He...he...*sob*.
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Mood: Love ~Shorttail May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. <3
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:iconchrisjr5:
ok just finished it i dont no wat to say but great job ive only cried a couple of time for other books but this one ranks number two in the good fic cat. great job i dont no if there will be another one but i really enjoyed this.
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:icondarkdiscodant:
I'm sorry, but this story made me feel so much emotion and made me cry tears of happiness and sadness throughout the story.
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:icondeadpool96x:
Mood: Love ~DeadPool96x May 23, 2012  Student General Artist
DAMMIT! UR SON OF A BITCH! UR HAPPY MAKING A LOT OF PERSONES CRY, LIKE ME? U THINK THIS IS FUNNY? U ARE PLAYING WITH OUR SENTIMENTS >.< Congratulations for this beautiful fanfic, the spanish communirty cryied hard as the english community, ur fanfic is sooo popular in internet, with translate in spanish (yes, audio-videos, documents, etc) and THANKS FOR CREATE THE BEST FANFIC OF DA WORL!
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Mood: Love ~its-hammer-time May 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I only saw by chance that this story existed recently, but by god i'm glad i took the time to read it.

Not much brings me to tears these days in terms of stories, be they written or a movie or series. I can only recall two works of fiction making me this emotional in my whole life, and that was reading the manga Elfen Lied and the ending of Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann. This is now the third work of fiction i have read/watched to ever bring me to tears :P

This is such a bittersweet, beautiful story, and so well written. I mean, it must be if it has evoked so much emotion from so many people :p I imagine you're sick of seeing comments for this work of yours, but i just wanted to say damn good job, and thank you for writing this :)
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:iconlegendaryhyuuzo:
How did you get so much, but so much creativity to make a beautiful story like this? I mean ... you have not cried or felt sad when he created this story?? Anyway ... Excellent Work!! =D
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Mood: Love ~iamthedarkestday May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i read this, and it is officially the second only story that ever made me cry, the first one got resistance, but this one could not be stopped...it just forced me to cry. and yet i love this story. you're good at writing :D
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Mood: Love ~UtterlyLudicrous May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't wait until this movie is made. [link]
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